Designation_D-5

Failed. Oh well.

Arilovr144

That sucks, I’m sorry
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Designation_D-5

The replacement chapter is out now! 
          
          I'm also here to let you know that I'm gonna be on hiatus for a bit as I've got a driving theory test comin' up and I need to study for it.
          
          I'll be back at this whenever I can, I just gotta focus on this first. Hope y'all understand. 
          
          Thank you, goodbye :}

Designation_D-5

@Arilovr144 Thank you, I feel I'll need it
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Arilovr144

@Designation_D-5 nice!! Wishing you luck
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Designation_D-5

@Arilovr144 Two more days and I should be able to tell ya, still waiting, still studying. (I'm  bored asf rn)
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Designation_D-5

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Okay. So...
          I took a look at the chapter I didn't like. The chapter being: "-Roll Call!-".
          
          
          
          And, uh... looking over it now, well...
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          I have no idea what I was on and what my intentions were with it, but I certainly didn't intend to write a fucking where's waldo audio book.
          
          So I'm gonna remove it. Permanently.
          It'll still be there until I get the replacement chapter ready and posted, but I——HEAVILY——suggest that you refrain from reading that cringe-fest.
          It does not get better further down. At all.
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          There is no hope for that accursed thing.
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          Okay that's all, have a good night :}

Designation_D-5

I feel trapped.
          Trapped in a small box of matches.
          Waiting for the day I am selected, for my flame to be used up until I am completely burnt out.
          Until I am of no use to anyone-- anyone including myself.
          
          I feel trapped, trapped in an endless loop of invisible barriers I can never hope to break though.
          Barriers that are set by no-one, no-one but myself.
          I feel all I can do is push them again, and again. With the only outcome being that I am in a bigger box.
          It's still empty, it's still cold, it's still dark.
          And yet. These barriers I continue to place.
          And yet. All I feel I can do. Is push.
          
          
          Am I trying to live a dream? Or am I being imprisoned by it?
          I don't know, all I can do is push.
          But what will I do if my legs give way? If my arms get tired?
          I don't know. All I can do is push.
          
          
          I see the light sometimes. But the gap is too small.
          So I push, and I push, and I push.
          The gap gets wider for me. The light is brighter now.
          I reach for It. But it's too far away for me to get to.
          My arms; too tired to stretch-- my legs; too sore to jump.
          My goal, right there, yet I can't do anything to achieve it.
          
          I turn away from the light. I see more barriers.
          Maybe. Maybe I'll reach from there.
          I push, and I push, and I push.
          More barriers.
          I push, and I push, and I push.
          More barriers.
          I turn around-- the light has vanished.
          I push... and I push... and I push...
          More barriers...
          
          
          There is light, once more.
          The gap: too small.
          Pushing; yet again.
          The gap: more open-- the light: brighter.
          ...
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          Too far away...
          
          
          
          
          I look back... more barriers...
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          …I think.... am I losing it?
          … Or have I already gone mad...?
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          Maybe... maybe I'm just tired....
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          Maybe...

Arilovr144

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HOLY SHIT DUDE. THIS IS AMAZING. Honest to god, chefs fucking kiss my LORD this is breathtaking I’m not even fucking kidding. I understood what you wrote and you wrote it so powerfully.
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Designation_D-5

Why hellooo all you magnificent people! (...At least that's what I think you are.) I hath returned, and I'm gonna be working on my story again. 
          
          I'm likely typing a chapter as your reading this right now and this announcement is entirely- pointless aside from the fact that it's notifying you- (I AIN'T DEAD) - it is DEFINATELY being worked on again.
          
          So yeah that's it, talk to ya'll later.
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          (Oh aye, before I forget I'm also gonna rewrite the chapter "-Roll Call!-" as I-- currently -- really fuckin hate it, and it's one quarter of the reason I didn't continue updating the story. So yeah, that'll happen. Lemme know if I should keep the old chapter in or not so my mistakes can be laughed at or sumthin idk)-
          
          -Aight bye 

Designation_D-5

@Arilovr144 Thanks! It's good to finally be back.
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Designation_D-5

@CynTessia Thanks! It's good to finally be back.
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Arilovr144

Glad to have you back @Designation_D-5 :)
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Designation_D-5

I've updated the cover page of my current story. (Murder drones: "You're in my world, now...")  I know this isn't really an important announcement, but I just thought I'd let y'all know to avoid confusion.
          
          Also, I wanna know: Should I change the title of my book or is it fine as is?
          
          That's all I gotta say for tonight. (I'm tired af) Good night and/or morning to everyone reading this. See Ya!