celeana18
Hi! I see you are trying to get your story out there! It's really good!!! As for grammatical errors... the only thing was with the word cant and Im. Which need the apostrophe. Can't and I'm. But that's pretty much it I think.
Writing is my passion as well! I'm also trying to get my story out there... If it isn't to much trouble or if you get the time, it would be great if you could check out one of mine and give me feedback.
Great story though. I think I caught a lot of foreshadowing in it. ;)
DestinyGlenn
Oh my God, Thank you so much! I'll read yours over the weekend :) I really appreciate you taking the time to look at mine.
