DeusExLogica

Thanks again for the insightful and thoughtful comments on my story. Look forward to seeing your works as well!

Shinobi 你知道中文笔友吗？我要练习我的中文跟一个中文母语。 =_=''

@TheLastFallenAngel We understand

@DeusExLogica S'okay. I'll wait. However, when you reply to something someone said, you should probably click the reply button, or type @(username) so we know you're responding to us~

Your interest is flattering. I'll post when I'm done with a story. Otherwise you'll get bored between chapters (and I'll be hesitant to rewrite them; I need to stay flexible).

Also, I'm still waiting for you to publish a story of your own~!

Dedicated is 耿耿 (gěnggěng), by the way ;)

i did not forget the ransom, nor will Arstain...... I'll just leave it at that.

Thanks again for your comments, most appreciated! The first five or so chapters I'm completely redoing, even before you commented, just because when I was reading them briefly over, I was overwhelmed by the number of plot holes I had written in. But thanks for the comments, and I will take them into consideration when rewriting.

Thanks for the comment. I know I have to fix the adverbs, but I'm still writing it and I'm just trying to get through, and then I'll fix it up after. And with Visir and Ioden, it may seem a little foggy about them, but in the next chapter it kind of explains who they are and what kind of relationship they have. But thanks again for the comment.