Av0528

He left her on the day of their engagement.
          
          
          Returned two years later - as a traitor.
          
          
          And she was forced to do the unthinkable.
          
          She pulled the trigger.
          And their story ended.
          
          
          Or did it?
          
          
          Some endings still have something left to say.
          
          
          Their story didn't end at the trigger.
          
          ✨ Kuch Baat Abhi Baki Hai —
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/376411966?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=Av0528
          
          Hi, I would like to share my story with you. Please give it a try whenever time permits. Sorry to disturb you; feel free to remove it if it's not something you like.

pearlnova24

"Hi! I hope you don’t mind me saying this, but I recently wrote a story and I’d really appreciate it if you could take a moment to read it. I genuinely value thoughtful opinions, and yours would mean a lot to me. If you do get a chance to check it out, I’d love to hear what you think — even a small comment or honest feedback or vote would be amazing. Thank you in advance!" ✨ 
          
           Here’s the link if you'd like to check it out: [ https://www.wattpad.com/story/392133026?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=pearlnova24  ]

Devilindark_9

@pearlnova24 Sure I'll read it... I hope you can read mine.... And give your feedback through comments
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Alanacog

Hi, I'm loving the beginning of the story and I want to know if they're goig to be a switch like says in the tag or will it be Top Lorenzo and Bottom Nicholas? 
          I hope it's Top Lorenzo and no switch (I like older Top and no Switch stories)

Tales_of_Ember

@Devilindark_9 They could be switches, this could show that Nico could be dominant and take control
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Devilindark_9

@Alanacog Thank you so much for giving the story a chance — I’m really happy to have you reading it!
            
            To be honest, I haven’t fully decided on the final dynamic yet. I’m leaning toward a switch, because I personally enjoy stories where both characters get to feel safe, wanted, and vulnerable with each other — it feels more emotionally satisfying to me that way.
            
            I know a lot of stories portray the older CEO type as always dominant, but I really want Lorenzo to be more than just the typical alpha male. I want him to be someone who can be strong, yes, but also feel like home when he’s with Nico — someone who can open up and receive love, not just give it.
            
            That said, I completely respect readers’ preferences and I hope you’ll enjoy the emotional journey between them as it unfolds. I promise to stay true to the heart of the characters.
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