GAY_CHIKEN_1234

Heya friend!!!
          So idk if you remember but I kinda read ur story  (u asked me) XD and I don't REMEMBER if I already said smt about it XD. SO I was wondering if you were still working on it cuz I really enjoyed it and I would love it if you continued the story. Of course I don't want to punch you or make you feel like you have to write it but yeah just wanted to drop this off here. 
          
          WITH LOTS OF LOVE AND HAPPINESS 
          ELISABETH<3

GAY_CHIKEN_1234

@GAY_CHIKEN_1234  I am Happy you replied. I myself only read finished stories but I do have a reading list with ongoing stories by other people. So what I mean is that maybe people just don't want to read an ongoing story. And also the don't like write even if you don't want to. Good stories always take time for some more than other. Just wanted to say. And maybe if you need help j can help out. I am not a native English speaker but I have C1 knowledge so I could help if you want. Well anyway glad you replied. 
            
            Lots of support 
            Elisabeth<3
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Devilindark_9

@GAY_CHIKEN_1234 Thanks a lot for reading, honestly I lost hope to write coz nobody was interested  plus I have my semester's going on, but yes I have this story in my mind so whenever I would get time I would surely try to write it... I'm so glad that you read it and asked about it
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Av0528

He left her on the day of their engagement.
          
          
          Returned two years later - as a traitor.
          
          
          And she was forced to do the unthinkable.
          
          She pulled the trigger.
          And their story ended.
          
          
          Or did it?
          
          
          Some endings still have something left to say.
          
          
          Their story didn't end at the trigger.
          
          ✨ Kuch Baat Abhi Baki Hai —
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/376411966?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=Av0528
          
          Hi, I would like to share my story with you. Please give it a try whenever time permits. Sorry to disturb you; feel free to remove it if it's not something you like.

pearlnova24

"Hi! I hope you don’t mind me saying this, but I recently wrote a story and I’d really appreciate it if you could take a moment to read it. I genuinely value thoughtful opinions, and yours would mean a lot to me. If you do get a chance to check it out, I’d love to hear what you think — even a small comment or honest feedback or vote would be amazing. Thank you in advance!" ✨ 
          
           Here’s the link if you'd like to check it out: [ https://www.wattpad.com/story/392133026?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=pearlnova24  ]

Devilindark_9

@pearlnova24 Sure I'll read it... I hope you can read mine.... And give your feedback through comments
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Alanacog

Hi, I'm loving the beginning of the story and I want to know if they're goig to be a switch like says in the tag or will it be Top Lorenzo and Bottom Nicholas? 
          I hope it's Top Lorenzo and no switch (I like older Top and no Switch stories)

AuthorEMBoxall

@Devilindark_9 They could be switches, this could show that Nico could be dominant and take control
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Devilindark_9

@Alanacog Thank you so much for giving the story a chance — I’m really happy to have you reading it!
            
            To be honest, I haven’t fully decided on the final dynamic yet. I’m leaning toward a switch, because I personally enjoy stories where both characters get to feel safe, wanted, and vulnerable with each other — it feels more emotionally satisfying to me that way.
            
            I know a lot of stories portray the older CEO type as always dominant, but I really want Lorenzo to be more than just the typical alpha male. I want him to be someone who can be strong, yes, but also feel like home when he’s with Nico — someone who can open up and receive love, not just give it.
            
            That said, I completely respect readers’ preferences and I hope you’ll enjoy the emotional journey between them as it unfolds. I promise to stay true to the heart of the characters.
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