Wow!!! All I can say is wow! I finished your story, Beautiful Undead and thought it was great! Good descriptions and everything. Except maybe that some of it kinda was cliche. Such as forks, washington and cap leaving chloe. Kinda reminds me of Twilight, which I love don't worry, but kinda cliched. Anyways good job! When are you going to post more of Beautiful Undead? I read the first two chapters and was quite suprised, excited, and welll just hapy except about elizabeth! So yeah, oh and you should check my story out, The Gifted Ones. Thnx and great job again!