thequeen3260

Could u follow me back so like if some things i wouldn't like too share too other people uk have ur own message between me and u so uk like I don't have too keep finding ur profile too write a response u are a wonderfully writer and i think u lots for writing a new part I don't be on wattpad a lot unless like I get a notification that a new chapter came out on ur book or feel like reading a dark romance book I am not here often they dont make a lot of brio books there not a lot of chapters someone lowkey needs too make a couple of brio stores that has dark romance or a possesive romance but i think u a lot for writing and i will read ur new chapter

thequeen3260

Your so welcome I have like read all the rio and beth books they don't make much like they make stories that I don't feel like the people are close too each other I like stories that I think the people are close with I really don't like the stories that that person and reader they have that more than any stories that have people that are close too each other and rio and beth stories they don't make a lot of them even since that show has been out for a while and I think you for having the time too even write one it means a lot too me I like too write and read but not make stories because I don't know how too make them and I love reading other people's stories

DewaniMastani

@thequeen3260 I think I know exactly what you mean. 
            
            One of the reasons I wanted to write this fanfic in the first place is because I absolutely loved Brio, but I wasn't always happy with the way the show handled them 
            
             I read a lot of fics too, and eventually I just decided to write my own version of their story and explore the relationship the way I wanted to see it.
            
            And don't sell yourself short! Just because you don't write stories right now doesn't mean you couldn't if you ever wanted to.
            
             Reading a lot is honestly one of the best ways to learn storytelling. 
            
            But whether you end up writing or not, I'm really grateful that you've taken the time to read mine and leave such thoughtful comments.
            
            Thank you for supporting the story and sticking withme . It genuinely means more than you know 
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thequeen3260

Are u gonna update the life for a life one i want too read the rest till the end and leaving use on a cliff hanger it sucks cause it was my favorite so far I am not trying too be rude or anything

thequeen3260

@thequeen3260 yw like I dont mean full dark romance but yea a possessive one make a little bit of smut in it as a possesive one
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DewaniMastani

@thequeen3260 
            
            That's actually really helpful feedback, and I'll definitely keep it in mind when I'm writing future chapters. 
            
            Sometimes I get carried away because I like showing what both of them are thinking  
            
            As for Rio being a little possessive, don't worry, I already have some plans for that in future chapters  
            
             I don't know if I'll go fully into dark romance territory, but a jealous and possessive Rio is definitely something you'll be seeing 
            
            I always love hearing everyone's ideas and seeing what readers enjoy. 
            
            Sometimes the best scenes come from suggestions I hadn't even thought of before, so thank you for sharing yours! 
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thequeen3260

Also its good but I don't like how it goes back too back on both perspectives  for a long chapter if u know what I mean it is really good and I love it u should make a chaper were rio is possesive over beth like throw a little bit of a dark romance in there u don't have too just give ideas its always good too give others ideas
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ChassityFelton2

Are u gonna post another chapter i wanna read on how it ends

DewaniMastani

@thequeen3260 
            
            Yep, I'll post tomorrow
            
             Thanks for sticking with me! 
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thequeen3260

Hey u posting more chapters
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DewaniMastani

@ChassityFelton2 
            
            Hey babe, thank you for always checking in, it means a lot! 
            
            I’ll be updating soon. If you’d like, I’ve also written more chapters on AO3 under the same title. 
            
            Feel free to check them out whenever you have time!
            
            https://archiveofourown.org/works/73001251/chapters/190205491
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ChassityFelton2

U should make more rio and beth stories i love the one u are writing rn

ChassityFelton2

Are u posting the next chapter today
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DewaniMastani

@ChassityFelton2 
            
            I’m currently focused on this story, and it’s definitely been a bit exhausting . 
            
            But if I ever decide to dive into another one, you’ll be the first to know!  
            
            Thanks so much for your support, it means a lot! 
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ChassityFelton2

Can u make more rio and beth stories i luv them
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imanie5

hi can I get the link for your book on AO3

DewaniMastani

@imanie5 
            Wow, what an absolutely beautiful and rare name, I love it  
            
            I’m honestly so excited for you to read the rest of the story!! ✨
            
            I can’t wait to hear all your thoughts and theories ! 
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imanie5

hi my name is Brithalia 
            bri-tha-lia
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DewaniMastani

@imanie5 Hi, Imanie! Sure thing  
            
            If you commented, make sure to tell me your name. 
            
            You’re my only Wattpad fan and I really want to remember you   
            
             https://archiveofourown.org/works/73001251/chapters/190205491
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iiPeachyPiscesii

Hi there,
          I hope you're doing well! If you have a moment, I would love for you to check out my books on ZaiRa.
          Happy reading!
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/374778758-zaira-one-shots
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/361711295-serenity-a-journey-within