Diamondsinthegrass

Homeland was good, though I only voted. I prefer comments as well - feedback is always the best, and votes often seem like an easy way out. Rest assured, I only vote when I like it and I don't comment unless I have nothing to say. Homeland was very good. I liked it. And I couldn't find much if anything wrong with it. At the end, you said there would be no point going on as it wouldn't make sense if Alina continued to write. Not necessarily... It could act as a diary - a diary of all the things she wish she could say to her former lover. Or a diary that symbolizes a therapetic effect on her damaged being.
          
          Just a couple suggestions. I love your writing prose.

Wow your an amazing writer!

You're welcome! It was a great story. x

yea I know, I'm working on something right now, but I'm designing a cover for it.

@Simpli hello lunch friend.  heehee.  you know what you should do?  you should post something.  you'v ehad the account longer than any of us, but you haven't posted anything.
          
          then again, i should just be happy you actually came on... so...
          hi!

Hello, it's you know who. well a lunch friend. muahaha

Hello!! I was wondering if you could give me some honest, and even harsh critiquing on my story!  Please, don't spare my feelings, and I promise I will return the favor with a read if wanted!  Thank You.

hey! jst got ur message and i feel lik i shld answer ur questions:)
          well i said after my post on ke chapter 2 or 3 which everyone allie was mentioned in....i put at the bottom tht Kate is the middle sister! it goes Jared, Kate and then Allie. ummmm it was supposed 2 b mysterious about who died at first but i know i mentioned who died ( tht it was their dad) in the 1st or second chapter. ......ummm wat else....oh yeah idk why u wld b confused with the chester situation bc i said tht he did die....i was being serious wen i wrote tht jared killed him but tht will b explained soon!
          and idk wht u meant by they sneak out like lost lovers? Jared was jst coming home and angie cldnt sleep so she jst went outside for some air! they didnt do tht wen they were 9! 
          sry if this sounded rude i rele didnt mean it 2 be! i was jst trying 2 answer ur ?s bc i hate wen i read a story and hav so many ?s!!
          if you have anymore PLEASE feel free to private message me bc id get it then with any of ur questons! trust me i kno im very confusing with my writing so i want 2 make it as least confusing as possible! let me know wenu get this! thanks for reading!
          cheesehead