DianePelletier

"Madison's Point Of View
          	
          	I sat in the back seat of my mom's black mercedes benz. Listening to my iPod while she drives to the bank to get extra cash. I looked out the window and admired the beautiful sun, that was shining bright in the sky. Why couldn't I be outside right now hanging out with my friends? Instead, I have to follow my mom around to do her stupid errands.
          	
          	The car came to a hault, and it was parked infront of the bank.
          	
          	"Can I just stay here mom? I'm too lazy to walk in there" I whined. It was true. I am lazy. Admit it, all teenagers are lazy.
          	
          	"Fine." my mom sighed. "I'm just going to be really quick so I'm just going to leave the car running okay sweety?" she said.
          	
          	"Okay." I answered back.
          	
          	She slammed the car door behind her and I watched her run off inside the bank.
          	
          	My mom is a single mom. My dad left us when I was only seven years old. Honestly, I miss him. He treated me like a princess when I was little. I am an only child.
          	
          	I shifted my gaze to the front of the car. My eyes widen and my heart raced. It was Jason McCann and his helper Nate. Jason is the most wanted criminal here in America.He's really good looking, but his mind is like a criminal. He's done robberies, bombings and even several murders. The feeling that he is infront of the car right now makes me just want to run away.
          	
          	They held a huge sack, money of course. I hoped my mom was okay in there. I panciked as I hid behind the passenger seat, making sure that my body was covered to make it look like no one was in the car.
          	
          	Suddenly, I heard one of the doors opened. The door leading to the driver seat. I hoped it was my mom. I looked over and I froze in terror to see Jason in the driver's seat with Nate in the front passenger seat.
          	
          	Fuck! This is bad. I'm in the same car as Jason McCann. I wonder if he saw me or not. Probably not because he didn't even turn back to face the back seats.
          	
          	I was now shaking, I sloc..." http://wattpad.com/story/1864170

DianePelletier

"Madison's Point Of View
          
          I sat in the back seat of my mom's black mercedes benz. Listening to my iPod while she drives to the bank to get extra cash. I looked out the window and admired the beautiful sun, that was shining bright in the sky. Why couldn't I be outside right now hanging out with my friends? Instead, I have to follow my mom around to do her stupid errands.
          
          The car came to a hault, and it was parked infront of the bank.
          
          "Can I just stay here mom? I'm too lazy to walk in there" I whined. It was true. I am lazy. Admit it, all teenagers are lazy.
          
          "Fine." my mom sighed. "I'm just going to be really quick so I'm just going to leave the car running okay sweety?" she said.
          
          "Okay." I answered back.
          
          She slammed the car door behind her and I watched her run off inside the bank.
          
          My mom is a single mom. My dad left us when I was only seven years old. Honestly, I miss him. He treated me like a princess when I was little. I am an only child.
          
          I shifted my gaze to the front of the car. My eyes widen and my heart raced. It was Jason McCann and his helper Nate. Jason is the most wanted criminal here in America.He's really good looking, but his mind is like a criminal. He's done robberies, bombings and even several murders. The feeling that he is infront of the car right now makes me just want to run away.
          
          They held a huge sack, money of course. I hoped my mom was okay in there. I panciked as I hid behind the passenger seat, making sure that my body was covered to make it look like no one was in the car.
          
          Suddenly, I heard one of the doors opened. The door leading to the driver seat. I hoped it was my mom. I looked over and I froze in terror to see Jason in the driver's seat with Nate in the front passenger seat.
          
          Fuck! This is bad. I'm in the same car as Jason McCann. I wonder if he saw me or not. Probably not because he didn't even turn back to face the back seats.
          
          I was now shaking, I sloc..." http://wattpad.com/story/1864170