DianneWinterLi

@bcokas either this one http://www.wattpad.com/story/5391678-bikes-havoc-and-lolita or this one http://www.wattpad.com/story/6129675-the-zombie-hunter. For Bikes, Havoc and Lolita I can't post more chapters here because Wattpad forbids the content. Wattpad would forbid Nabokov's Lolita, not to mention heavy stuff like American Psycho or Fight Club. Here is all about fluffy girly stories that mean and say nothing and it's getting on my nerves so much already that it becomes a visceral repulsion and I might not Wattpad any longer. That's why when I discovered your story I sighed in relief. Not all is lost, my friend. 

DianneWinterLi

@bcokas either this one http://www.wattpad.com/story/5391678-bikes-havoc-and-lolita or this one http://www.wattpad.com/story/6129675-the-zombie-hunter. For Bikes, Havoc and Lolita I can't post more chapters here because Wattpad forbids the content. Wattpad would forbid Nabokov's Lolita, not to mention heavy stuff like American Psycho or Fight Club. Here is all about fluffy girly stories that mean and say nothing and it's getting on my nerves so much already that it becomes a visceral repulsion and I might not Wattpad any longer. That's why when I discovered your story I sighed in relief. Not all is lost, my friend. 

DianneWinterLi

@GreenAndBlueUsTwo I reviewed both your stories. I hope you take the good out of what I wrote there. I think you have a lot of potential as a writer, but you need to work hard if you want to achieve anything in this direction. First and foremost, you should read some serious stuff, not only Wattpad stories and vampire stories. Only reading good stuff you can improve your writing skill and of course writing and rewriting helps as well. I hope you return the favor and place a comments on any of my works here. Thank you.