@Kle5000 thx I appreciate the feedback. I try to use proper grammer and writing as I am also trying to write an actual novel that I can get published. So I guess the habits kinda travel over to here too lol.
@HOWLER1962 i am currently working on the next chapters. Not sure about how long it will be till it's done, but it is coming. Just been bogged down by work, and also with writing on another project.