DiasJ18

with college starting again and me needing something to clear my mind i might start updating again.
          	
          	actually i have a new TBATE story and maybe also a Dune story in the works, i'll see how i feel about them

DiasJ18

with college starting again and me needing something to clear my mind i might start updating again.
          
          actually i have a new TBATE story and maybe also a Dune story in the works, i'll see how i feel about them

mr_joe_343

A bit of constructive criticism for your Tokyo Ghoul fanfic.
          I do think the plot goes a bit fast, YN and Touka becoming an item in the first 5 chapters is an example.
          A few chapters more building up their bond and friendship would have served for s better pay off.
          The extra chapters would have worked to see a better development of YN's growth under the wing of Eto.
          The idea of the story is a powerful one, and the MC is enjoyable 
          I just think this story should take more time to cook.

DiasJ18

@ mr_joe_343  I see, well I'll try to improve from now on. Thanks for taking the time to give some constructive criticism
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mr_joe_343

Hey, how did your rewrite of chapter 14 of Tokyo Ghoul went? Is it already done?

DiasJ18

@ mr_joe_343  I'm so glad you like it, genuinely, thanks for the support
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mr_joe_343

@ DiasJ18  Been looking for a good written non harem Tokyo Ghoul fanfic, and my man I think yours is just what I was looking for 
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DiasJ18

@ mr_joe_343  hey there. Sorry but not yet, I just finished my finals for college last week and they left me absolutely exhausted so motivation has been a bit lacking. But I'll try to get it over with soon. Thanks for the interest
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DEALER_Ace

Hello? When is the next chapter of your "PEAK!" (Toga x Male Reader) come out?

DiasJ18

@DEALER_Ace its in the works, and by in the works I mean mostly done, so dont worry, it should come out soon. Ive just been a bit busy with college projects, but once Im done with them Ill try to update more frequently
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Monsieur_Stardust

Question, question, question, question! Is the reader (us) stronger then Radah? As we defeated him

DiasJ18

@ Monsieur_Stardust  who knows... That one I can't answer my friend.
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Monsieur_Stardust

@ Monsieur_Stardust  Question 2 - This don't change Miquella plans? As he only choose Radah because of his strength, this would not make Miquella wanting reader (Us) as his consort?
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DiasJ18

@ Monsieur_Stardust  yep, we are. We are the strongest of them all... until a certain point to come in the story where we will have a bit of a fall down, but we will be back stronger than ever
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Monsieur_Stardust

Hey man, how have you been? I hope you're okay, it's me again 
          Sorry for bugging you, but I had an idea I'd like to share with you. I don't know if you're a fan of souls games in general or just Elden Ring. 
          I also don't know if you've played more souls games besides Elden Ring, but reading your Elden Ring fanfic, which has a kind of crossover with Shuumatsu, after all, the reader (we) are based on Siegfried (and Hades too), an idea came to me that I simply couldn't forget. 
          I don't know if you've played Bloodborne? (Play it, the game is AWESOME) But with this crossover idea, a Bloodborne fanfic came to mind where the reader (us) would be inspired by Jack from Shuumatsu? It works well when you stop to think about it. Yharnam (The city of Bloodborne) is based on 19th century London, Yharnam is probably a fictional city in the United Kingdom in the Bloodborne universe, Jack (De Shuumatsu) is a London knight, his look matches the look of the hunters in Bloodborne, his weapons work well with the mentality of deceiving and adapting to hunt the beasts and even how he sees the blood gloves to kill Hercules matches Bloodborne. 
          It's just a silly idea that I couldn't get out of my head, so I'm sharing it, nothing major. Thanks for your service bro, keep up the good work man, have a good day.

Monsieur_Stardust

@ Monsieur_Stardust  London Knight - Would be a gentleman, i used google translator to writte the message, hence the mistakes
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Monsieur_Stardust

Hey man, how are you? It's me again, sorry to torment you, but I was really happy with the fanfic and I really liked it and I have a curiosity 
          
          Apparently it took some time for Marika and Radagon to find out about Miquella's curse of eternal youth and probably about Malenia's scarlet rot, just as it probably also took a while for Malenia's scarlet rot to start devouring some of her limbs, Miquella manages to stop this later with the Miquella's needle, apparently, Malenia and Miquella were kind of isolated because of this, apparently Marika wasn't a very present mother in their lives, probably because of Miquella's Eternal Youth curse and Malenia's scarlet rot, Godwin seemed to be one of the few who accepted them, seeing as how the reader (we) have an important role in the fanfic, I imagine that we will also accept both of them? I imagine that the reader (we) will be there to support both Malenia and Miquella in the moments they need it, especially Malenia.  
          
          Sorry to bother you and have a great day friend! 

DiasJ18

@ Monsieur_Stardust  firstly, i hope you also have a great day. And yeah, we'll be very supportive of the twins, Miquella and us will have a very close relation almost kike us and Godwyn and Malenia... well, just read thw title of the fanfic and you can predict that they'll be very close.
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