Thank you for your comments. I'm happy that the story is well received amongst fans of the series. I found myself that Beginning of Line lacked direction because so many people were writing it without any general story idea being given.
My own first attempt at writing the end of Caprica turned out a bit silly, prompting me to rewrite it completely. The problem with that was that I eventually ran out of steam and never got to finish it. I hope to return soon and am currently re-watching all BSG episodes in preparation.
I can't give much information about what I have planned for the Hades character. The Ones, Fours, and Fives, I felt, were much closer to the more mechanical way the centurions thought as opposed to those who formed the rebel faction. There is a Lucifer character within the story, who is definitely a favorite of Hades, but as to the nature of the Hades character himself, he may be human, Cylon, or something in between, like Tamara (V-world ghost).
