@MichaelUrge7 I'll be honest with you, you were kinda having trouble with honorifics and all, but I didn’t find it annoying...rather funny seeing Sudou using 'kun' and all. Now, what I liked about the first chapter is how well you wrote Hirata's character and Nagumo's, 'cause I genuinely believe he’d pounce on every opportunity he gets to berate Kiyo. And most of all, Class D isn’t completely brain-dead, their reactions are natural, not over-exaggerated like in other cringey reaction fics. Good work, author.