Faded besides fire for example, I feel rushed it after a few chapters because I had suddenly lost interest in the middle, but if I look at it now I think I could do much better. The original idea in my mind had sounded way better.
The current story I feel I might be deviating from the plot or may be stretching it too much like a an Indian soap opera. How do you know when it’s just right? After finishing it? Or before?