DinkleSimpleton

It's been a while since I've last posted or updated a story, this account has been dead for a long time.
          	
          	I am glad to say that I will be writing again as my life has stabilized quite a bit for me to put in time to write.
          	
          	Next story to be published will be based on an existing franchise, it's a test for myself on how to make a nobody filled with a world of main character to stand out, and to warm up.
          	
          	Then once I've reached a good arc to stop.
          	
          	I plan on making my own original Novel.
          	
          	one I had to stop making years ago because the more I write it, the more I feel it wants more meaning from me.
          	
          	and the thought of giving something more meaning than my own life had scared me back then, that's why I stopped.
          	
          	But I'm not afraid anymore, so I hope you'll stay long enough until I finish and publish my original Novel.

Deltaoftherune

Hi there! I really like your story so far! I love how Rix and Eggman mirror each other, and I'm curious to see how Starline and Rix interact, as well as Sage and Rix. (I generally hope this isn't a harem story, as *way* too many stories use it and it gets really repetitive). I especially love mr Tinkers and Rix's interactions as well(Chapter 6 is my all-time favorite chapter in the entire story and got me really hooked into the story!) I hope you do more stories like this with stories not as well known(Ie, Higurashi, Undertale & deltarune, FNF & Celeste). 
          I also hope you do a character profile of Rix (Arabian  & King Arthur's world) as well as his overall character profile(assuming you drew it). I am really hyped for the battle on Angel Island part 3 & what you plan to do during the metal virus, I'm curious to see what you plan to change for that arc(Hopefully how Shadow Falls, since he got infected too quickly and it got put off) I'm Hyped to see how your story goes and I hope you're doing well out there!! @DinkleSimpleton

DinkleSimpleton

@Deltaoftherune 
            
            1. for his type with breeze and his boomerang wispon, he'd be agility, not necessarily flight, but he can fly with Breeze and his wispon just not as long as Tails or cream or charmy
            
            2. considering that's very early 'modern' sonic, I think I'd put Rix in adventure 1 as a victim of chaos and Rix instead of finding chaos emeralds, his gameplay would revolve around understanding what chaos is, the most prominent ally here is knuckles, then at the end of Sonic adventure 1 he'd be recruited into G.U.N. and this means in sonic adventure 2 his gameplay would revolve around rising in ranks through completing mission while stumbling and trying to stop shadow, while Rix is trying to find a way to stabilize shadow
            
            3. No, because there is no other wisp that wants to bond with Rix aside from Breeze, so again his gameplay would be more action hack and slash but always search for weak points first, coupled with breeze and his wispon its more of an upgraded utility where he gains the ability to hover and glide and his boomerang can be used as a jammer if upgraded
            
            4. Assuming the chaos emerald or master emerald deeming Rix is worthy of super form, he can access it, first of all he won't turn golden like sonic, silver, shadow, its more only aura and i need to be clear here, Rix is very weak when you compare him with other of the sonic cast so he won't be planetary or universal level instantly, but he does gain one new ability in super form, that i'm just going to call it chaos read (made it up on the spot xD) where he can manipulate chaos energy more freely than shadow and can even interrupt the flow of chaos energy.
            
            Bonus since you've been very patient and talking with me
            
            Rix will get a 'form' (very loosely used here) in the story, two actually where it will be integrated into rixs body, but it's not op, never will be as he only receives small amount of it
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Deltaoftherune

@DinkleSimpleton I really like the newest chapter, wrapping up everything in that arc in a neat little bow(especially that interaction with whisper & rix). I'd also think that Mimic would most definitely try to mess with Whisper by taking on Rix's form instead of Creams
            
            I also have some more interesting questions!
            
            1. Since you categorized Rix as a speed type without Breeze, what would his type be with Breeze (and his wispon?)
            2. I may have forgotten to put this into the last questions, but if Rix was in Sonic Adventure 1&2(NOT GAMEPLAY WISE), what would his gameplay revolve around(with wispon & breeze & without them), what would Rix's story revolve around in both games? 
            3. If he had his wispon & breeze, would his gameplay be like original the character(or the rookie), how much would his wispon & breeze affect his gameplay?
            
            4. If Rix were to gain a super form, what would it look like(assuming he could access it either through the Chaos Emeralds or the master emerald)? What new abilities would he gain? How much would Breeze be affected by his super form, as well?
            
            
            
            I apologize for being slightly as I just updated my phone, I hope I'm not being too overbearing or anything either;-;
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DinkleSimpleton

@Deltaoftherune here are my answers except for question 4
            
            1. He'd be speed, but focused more on parkour as, its actually really tricky since Rix isn't strong on his own, and can't fly like tails without Breeze, so if its rix alone he has to be speed
            
            2. If Rix joined Eggman during the events of sonic forces, the resistance would have a harder time because Rix is the only one to focus on everything that's going on without hyper-fixation on sonic or the phantom ruby, he'd be the rival to forces player created avatar, but in the middle to late events of forces he'd be morally hit and will leave Eggman, Eggman will not make a metal Rix. when Eggman said rix will be his greatest creation, it meant Eggman would replicate Rix as an AI, a living-self evolving code, a sort of older brother to sage if Eggman got a better read on Rix
            
            3. If Rix was in Sonic 06 his gameplay would not revolve around speed, it would revolve around closing temporal portals, finding fragments of solaris and time, identifying them, and making a counter to the destruction of the world, this will make Silver and Blaze as Rixs main opponents at the start from a misunderstanding where Rix thinks Silver and Blaze causes the time mess
            
            For Frontiers, his gameplay would be exploration, parkour, and a lot more deep dive into cyberspace, and by that more history of the world, less speed and action and more like assassins creed in terms of exploration, combat like pragmata
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DinkleSimpleton

It's been a while since I've last posted or updated a story, this account has been dead for a long time.
          
          I am glad to say that I will be writing again as my life has stabilized quite a bit for me to put in time to write.
          
          Next story to be published will be based on an existing franchise, it's a test for myself on how to make a nobody filled with a world of main character to stand out, and to warm up.
          
          Then once I've reached a good arc to stop.
          
          I plan on making my own original Novel.
          
          one I had to stop making years ago because the more I write it, the more I feel it wants more meaning from me.
          
          and the thought of giving something more meaning than my own life had scared me back then, that's why I stopped.
          
          But I'm not afraid anymore, so I hope you'll stay long enough until I finish and publish my original Novel.