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I just wanted to point out too that although the smut scenes are... well, graphic, they do demonstrate the way an aroace manages around certain psychological barries , body barries and reasons to actually engage. Not all chapters with smut include stripping down bare or heated nonsense. (Well, except for chapters 2-5) Everything else is dedicated with actual emotion, bond and trust. Some scenes are actually even less graphic than you might think (of course, I'm not trying to force you to read, just letting you know~♡) I'm an aroace myself so writing smut is actually kinda hard for me. The best way I can write is assuming the aroace perspective as stimulating over penetration. Or, one sided physical pleasing over the two way street those moment usually play out. Chapter 24 for example, it's more tourcher than anything and no one is stripping. Alastor just... stimulates the scene as a director
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So, Passion turned into a story where Alastor starts off as a prisoner in the Vee tower, ends up accidentally drinking a potion, and wound up with a very chaotic abusive and unporpotioned dynamic of drunken intoxicated sex with Vox. Chapters 2-5 have smut, angst and just pure abuse. Chapter 6 is a dream Vox has about an unrealistic happy ending with Alastor before waking up to reality (the very end has smut). Chapter 7 and 8 contain some smut, with deep conversations and apologies (might wanna skim through sorta). It's also when Valentino ends up in the story. Chapter 9 is where Alastor chooses to talk to Valentino over Vox for venting. Chapters 10 and 11 is Alastor and Valentinos Backstories with some fluff in between (some sexual abuse in 10 and a bit more in 11). The stories have some dark ends, especially Valentinos. Chapter 12 is fluff. Chapter 13 starts off with fluff, half way through is angst and by the end there's smut (just skip the moment you know they gonna do it, I always give a transition) the very end is important (once they finish). Chapter 14 and 15 is fluff with some angst. Chapter 16 is smut, skip it. Chapter 17 is spicy (some angst). Chapter 18 and 19 is fluff. Chapter 20 has a lot of smut, theres fluff about halfway through though. Chapter 21 is fluff with slight angst. Chapter 22 is intense but no smut. Chapter 23 has heavy foreplay, scroll down until you see a gap between paragraphs, that's when it transitions to fluff. Chapter 24 and 25 is fluff and some angst. Chapter 26 is fluff, angst and the ending is smut (the grand majority of chapter 26 has no smut, just some kissing until the end). Chapter 27 is in the making but I'm not gonna specify the details on smut, it's just gonna be angst with some fluff (I'm just gonna imply through wordplay that there was smut)
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@DinkyWinky I forgot to tell you, Chapter 1 is just angst with a little fluff at the end. Now that's everything, darlin'~♡
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I posted some poetry if you like that kinda stuff~♡
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Normally, I don't leave comments but you're pretty funny lol despite the sarcasm. Check my oage out if you'd like, I got a Radiostatic story in the works right now if your interested~♡
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Also, um, normally i dont rant on so much so dont think im always like this. For some reason i feel pressure talking to you, thats why (^-^;
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@lexper142 haha, sorry *feeling awkward and regret* ima shut up now and let you be darlin'
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@lexper142 Don't worry my dear i was just joking- (geez how many text im not gonna read all that) i am pretty sure i stand for myself don't need to either worry or make a 7 lines text- be ok
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