noriya08

Okay waittt, why is your story actually eating so bad ✨ I’m seriously loving it so far. It’s so fun and interesting, and you already have me hooked wanting to know what happens next. The way everything is coming together is so good, and your writing style makes it super easy to picture everything and feel what’s going on. I can tell how much creativity you put into it, and you’re doing such an amazing job. I’m honestly so excited to keep reading because this is GOOD good and now I’m investeddd

noriya08

Ofc!! Yessss! I can’t wait!
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Dinkycrash

@noriya08 Thank you so much, i'm glad you're enjoying it. We are about you enter the finale stage pretty soon. I've got it all storyboarded just need to get it into words
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louis_debora

Beautifully crafted scene — the contrast between serenity and unease is gripping. Dorran’s confusion, the creature’s calm mystery, and the sudden emergence of the crimson tower create powerful momentum. Your world-building feels rich and purposeful. Excited to see where this unfolds.

louis_debora

@Dinkycrash Your character lineup is impressive — the visual language you’ve chosen really strengthens their presence, I ask because I work in digital art professionally — character concepts, cover design, environmental moods, the full spectrum. And your story has the kind of tone that artists instantly notice.
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Dinkycrash

@louis_debora Ahh thanks! I’ve added the character visuals to the “extra media” section on the chapter.
            
            The first one is Dorran, and the other two are Lockard and Lucy — they haven’t shown up in the story yet, but they’re coming soon. The big guy is Mute, the one Dorran sees in the garden.
            
            Hope you enjoy seeing how I picture them!
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louis_debora

@Dinkycrash Definitely!!, Well  do you post visuals/refs for you characters somewhere? I'd love to see how you imagine them.
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