louis_debora

Beautifully crafted scene — the contrast between serenity and unease is gripping. Dorran’s confusion, the creature’s calm mystery, and the sudden emergence of the crimson tower create powerful momentum. Your world-building feels rich and purposeful. Excited to see where this unfolds.

louis_debora

@Dinkycrash Your character lineup is impressive — the visual language you’ve chosen really strengthens their presence, I ask because I work in digital art professionally — character concepts, cover design, environmental moods, the full spectrum. And your story has the kind of tone that artists instantly notice.
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Dinkycrash

@louis_debora Ahh thanks! I’ve added the character visuals to the “extra media” section on the chapter.
            
            The first one is Dorran, and the other two are Lockard and Lucy — they haven’t shown up in the story yet, but they’re coming soon. The big guy is Mute, the one Dorran sees in the garden.
            
            Hope you enjoy seeing how I picture them!
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louis_debora

@Dinkycrash Definitely!!, Well  do you post visuals/refs for you characters somewhere? I'd love to see how you imagine them.
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