Hey! Hi :)
I was starting to read Naruto: Rise of the forgotten genius, but the capital letters and the fact that I don't know when someone is talking (".."), doesn't help.
Are you going to fix this some day?
I mean, I wanna read it, but English is not my natal idiom, so when there are grammar error it get my mind get Katsu!
Soo... That's all ^-^
I really hope that this comment don't make you angry/annoyed or something like that