Diolden

I'm back again to wattpad, and the first chapter is already out of my new book! I would really appreciate any comments, ideas or critique on this one. Hope you enjoy it :)

Diolden

Every year I freeze my butt of on my balcony, watching the black sky explode in hundreds of different colors while drinking the worlds most disgusting drink, cider.
          And every year I keep drinking until that damn glass is empty, because that's how I celebrate the New year. 
          Happy New Year's Eve!

Diolden

Once I had a dream. I dreamt I was the moon. 
          I was so beautiful and inspiring, and my creativity and brightness never ended. 
          But the thing was, that no one got to admire my beauty. 
          You see, clouds covered up the amazing sight, and all earth could see was the fluffy ceiling.
          once or twice, though, the clouds dispersed, and you could finally see the sky.
          But every time that happened, the sun shone brighter than me.
          And in my dream I longed for the day when the clouds would lift, and I would be the brightest light.
          Then I woke up, and I couldn't help but wonder;
          How many more moons are there out there, that no one seems to notice?
          
          24/12/2015 (Just some poem I wrote today)

buzzmama

Greetings Diolden. Thanks for following me. I see that your writing has already gained a lot of success. I wish you the best with your endeavors, and I know you will find Wattpad to be a wonderful place to connect with readers and writers.