Frank Colburn

Hi! Sorry for the shameless plug but if you have time I’d appreciate it if you’d check out my story! Thank you ! <3
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/298601231-tokyo-bay-riders

I've replaced the 5th chapter of the Hybrid Cycle with something different.  Writing out the Bea and Pierce scenes.

Friends and Readers,
          
          I’m going to break my cardinal rule here by editing during the rough draft.  Some chapters will get tossed; namely, the sections with Pierce.  Too side-tracky.  Overall, Beatrice doesn’t need some dude to be the catalyst for her interests.  She needs to be more fleshed-out.