DistortedBattler2
Just a general question, if you could only choose three out of this group, who would you pick?
Lady Nagant, Mina Ashido, Ochako Uraraka, Kallen Kozuki (Code Geass), Kyoka Jiro.
If you don't want to choose three, then could you answer this second question instead?
Do harems enhance, or ruin fics for you?
Thank you.
DistortedBattler2
@Purpleguyplaz67 I gained most of my experience with writing on this site with a fic I made with a fusion of My Hero Academia and Code Geass, which I had a lot of momentum with at first, but I got lost in the sauce, introduced an oc that had no place in the story, and who was just poorly written. I have recently started working on a redo/redux of the original story I had, with a stronger focus on pacing and character work. One of the biggest problems with my original fic was that I was very inexperienced, and wrote a harem that was way too big for it to make sense, plus a lot of scenes were just there because I was bored. It took like 25 chapters to get to UA or something, I don't remember exactly, that's how bad it got. I want to narrow the story down to four harem members, and I think I've got the idea for how each character will play in, (Mina, Kallen, Kyoka, Nagant currently). I just realized how much I typed, sorry for ranting mate.
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