DivineScythe48

http://my.w.tt/UiNb/MvpyOVmHhB this book is lost of fun to read plz check it out

zainab12378

Hi! So Ahem! I'm actually embarrassed to ask you this but would you mind to take a look at my first book( Days of our lives) it's in my profile, you don't have to vote or anything, but maybe you could tell me if i did something wrong then i can fix it, i accept any kind of critics, i just want to make the most of this writing experience:)
          Thanks for your time, have a good one:)  

Nathandd123

Also did you really have to steal the seven deadly sins?

Nathandd123

@Nathandd123 not really stole thdm.i mean tmore lkke take their plot line
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Nathandd123

Hey divine you have an amazing plot line so far but please either have someone double check your grammar for you or re read the chapters as you write them it really helps and plus that way you spell see Instead of sea just some friendly advice because I'm only at the first chapter and there is so much wrong just take your time on the chapters no need to rush and make sure you spelt it all correctly