Divine_Mist

@hitwoman  No you arent rude honestly that's why I am editing it. I dont feel they are evolving either

@divine_mist I really like your story and I've been following it's progress for a long while now, and i know your're editing so your story is under a lot of construction but i mostly wanted to talk about the character development of amelia and adrian and how they haven't evolved any as the story has gone on because they don't really talk about their problems like how adrian has serious abandonment issues, and he never even told amelia he had any living family before they got married, or how amelia still can't absorb the fact that her parents aren't who they say they are and that they were lying to her whole life, she's always trying to run away but it's been 2 years for her of being a vampire and she still hasn't acclimated amelia and adrian repeat the same old arguments with no solutions or ultimatums or at least an understanding of where the other person is coming from, sorry this explanation is so long, i hope i didn't come off as rude, and thanks for taking the time to read my comment.

@hitwoman sure

@ Divine_Mist  there is no update

@ Divine_Mist  yes of.coures I love this story

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