Emmiliad
This chapter has a quiet, eerie charm. The atmosphere of the late-night café is vivid, and Aki’s exhaustion blends perfectly with the subtle glitches around her. The barista’s calm, almost unreal presence adds a slow-building tension that feels both comforting and unsettling. The pacing is gentle but carries an undercurrent of something bigger waking beneath the surface. It’s mysterious, soft, and intriguing—really well done.
DivyBhawnani
@Emmiliad Ahhhahahhahhh thank youuuu so much!! This is the first time I have gone off combining different genres like romance and thriller and compliments like these are what get me excited enough to make more experiments!! Thank yoouuuuu