@anOverthinkingDevil Hi, sorry I overlooked your previous message. I enjoyed reading all three of your books... started off with I've Got My Eye On You, then read It's All For You and finally Collateral. I must say that your style of writing, your characters, the plot of your stories and the way you end your stories are really captivating.
I apologise that I don't comment on any chapters. I'm more of a silent reader, my way of showing that I like a book or author is by voting on the chapters and then reading all the other stories written by the author... so, next I'll be reading Guldastaa...
Wishing you all the best!