Dizzzy22

Has anyone ever shipped something that you're still embarrassed to this day about?.

Devil_slayer322

Great job on ur rewrite on awkward encounter  but I still enjoyed the first time u written it because the way u wrote it and ur idea but this rewrite is such in a romantic rhythm, description in detail I say u did a excellent job and u are making sure that u still on the same idea and now I want to see how far u will write ur story 

Dizzzy22

@Devil_slayer322 Aw thankssss. I'm def going to keep the main idea, I just wanted to change it a little
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owookayy

OHHHHH~
          There's a place I know
          That's tucked away;
          A place where you and I can stay
          Where we can go to laugh and play
          And have adventures everyday!
          I know it sounds hard to believe
          But guys and gals it's true
          Camp Campbell is the place for me and you!
          
          We'll swim through lakes and climb up trees;
          Catch fish, bugs, bears, and honeybees!
          There's endless possibilities
          And no
          That's not hyperbole!
          Our motto's "CAMPE DIEM"
          And that means I'm telling you~
          
          We've got:
          Archery
          Hiking
          Search & Rescue
          Biking
          Horseback
          Training that will save you from a heart attack
          Scuba diving
          Miming
          Keeping up with rhyming
          Football
          Limbo
          Science
          Stunting
          Pre-Calc
          Spaceships
          Treasure hunting
          Bomb defusal
          No refusal
          Fantasy
          Circus trapeze
          And Fights
          And Ghosts
          And Paints
          And Snakes
          And Knives
          And Chess
          And Dance
          And Weights–
          
          it's Camp Camp!
          
          
          

COCOPOPO3352

I'M ALWAYS HERE-

COCOPOPO3352

NO, YOU SOULDNT- IT'S FINE! 
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            I'm just out side your window- (I'M JOKING--)
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Dizzzy22

@COCOPOPO3352 SHOULD I BE CONCERNED
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Devil_slayer322

Hello there I like ur fanfics it's great and better than mine and I'm struggling with it 

Dizzzy22

@Devil_slayer322 I think your story has a great concept, and I've never seen something like that before. I struggle with mine too, because sometimes ideas I have don't work, or I've made a mistake and I don't know how to play along with it. All it takes is time and you'll be an amazing writer. I hope your story goes well. :D
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