@Solesister71 Not that it matters bc I like how you wrote the story, but are you going to continue writing the next book in 3 person? I don't think I'll ever really give up, but I'm sure it will take me a long time to write an entire book. And when that is, I'm not sure if I'm going to want to share it. I am my biggest critic, but I'm not sure I can take mean comments from others. I blame this on my depression, anxiety and ptsd. I just take everything to heart and punish myself whenever I can't satisfy other people. =/