Dakota

I published my first short story “Is It Love?”. I created it for the Midnight Sun Movie competition and I was hoping you guys could read it and give me some feedback. It’s exactly 500 words so I can’t add anything too it unless I get rid of something so let me know how u guys feel about it. 

Thank u so much for voting!
          And well done with your book, it's going great

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