Dmoney1456

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Triple digits.... Holy shit.  I cannot thank you guys enough for reading my story so far.  I've had this concept in my head since high school, and only now I've worked up the courage to start writing it.  I'm so glad that you guys are liking the story.  That being said, I would like to hear suggestions of how I can make it better.  As a writer, I'm always trying to perfect my craft and learn every day.  So, feel free to leave comments on the chapters of my story to tell me what you like or dislike about it.  Until next time, everyone.

Dmoney1456

this message may be offensive 
Triple digits.... Holy shit.  I cannot thank you guys enough for reading my story so far.  I've had this concept in my head since high school, and only now I've worked up the courage to start writing it.  I'm so glad that you guys are liking the story.  That being said, I would like to hear suggestions of how I can make it better.  As a writer, I'm always trying to perfect my craft and learn every day.  So, feel free to leave comments on the chapters of my story to tell me what you like or dislike about it.  Until next time, everyone.