DoRandomThings

Hi there so yesterday one of my friends read my book and i was honestly super embarrassed so i am going to get my crap together and fix the book then finish it, but I NEED IDEAS AND HELP!!!

GenericUsername646

Why can't you write anything good!!!!

MoonWeaver77

@FoxerHawkins 
            First off, please care to tell me when did I ever imply that you weren't allowed to criticize?  Never did I imply that it wasn't allowed. I said that if you're going to criticize someone or their work don't insult in other words "do it right" 
            
            Secondly, yes I do know what insult means: 
            
            insult
            verb
            /ɪnˈsʌlt/
            speak to or treat with disrespect or scornful abuse.
            
            noun
            /ˈɪnsʌlt/
            1.
            a disrespectful or scornfully abusive remark or act.
            
            Google definitions.
            @GenericUsername646 's comment is a clear example of that. And I strictly remember me saying that "Why can't you do anything good" is belittling someone which is what such comments do. Explain to me in what way their comment was a supposed fair critique? 
            
            @DrMeme9 's comment was critique, that is what critique is. They said the characters are lifeless which is from an analysis of the book/s. Therefore a critique
            
            And lastly, @DoRandomThings had taken these comments very maturely and in a good mannered way unlike other people who would swear and be childish about it.
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MoonWeaver77

@FoxerHawkins 
            There is a fine line from criticizing someone/their work and insulting someone/their work
            
            Saying "Why can't you write anything good" is not criticizing, that is belittling someone. If you're going to criticize don't insult
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TheodoreGroveswife

@GenericUsername646 @DrMeme9 There is no reason to be rude. You can't just hate on someone because you don't like their stories. And saying stuff like it's worse then Got S8 is super rude like mind you there were multiple writers for that one season  and this person is only one, writing the book. And you can't expect a new writer to be good at everything. You can't expect her books to be as good as HP and so on. And even if you don't like the books then don't read them there is no reason for you to hate on this person just because you don't like the book like grow up and use your time doing something productive instead of hating on someone.
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DoRandomThings

Now, I'll admit that I'm a new Attack on Titan fan and began watching season 3 today but damn this is really painful  
          
          and the fandom is soooo different than what i'm used to

DoRandomThings

Yeah, if only Adrien was more attentive then i would've shipped them but i also love the dynamics between Luka and Mari because they're personalities are so different. Thats also why i ship Adrigami because she's straight forward and  knows what she wants and fights for it where adrien is too scared of hurting others feelings
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TheSmilingChocolate

@DoRandomThings I mean of course I still ship Adrien with Marinette but damn for once I just hope they can just notice each other i-
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DoRandomThings

@TheSmilingChocolate of course!! Adrien who? Come here Luka, Marinette needs someone who's not oblivious and notices her efforts
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piwky-

Heyyiie I followed you but will you unfollow this acc and follow my main @Valiant_sagiii 
          I'll be a permanent Followback in here..
          If you want to talk pm me anytime on my main...I'm always hereeeie
          Thank you uwuuuuuuu(人*´∀｀)｡*ﾟ+

DoRandomThings

 Hehe your so sweet, of course I will    ‘(*^*)’
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