DoctorDestiny

Seasons 4 of [TITLE CARD] has been pretty alright,  got more in the works,  not going to rush to ensure quality, buy i've got some ideas. 
          	
          	So more [TITLE CARD]: Thunderbolt is on the way, aswell as 
          	
          	Majesty is in the works. 
          	
          	

Norikon2

I was reading your story Invincible Thunderbolt and I really enjoyed it this scene feels very true to the tone of Invincible with strong character voices and a standout original hero in blue bolt. I think tightening some of the action descriptions could make certain moments even clearer but overall it flows really well one thing I’m curious about is Blue Bolt more afraid of failing as a new hero or of living up to and possibly replacing someone like Red Rush?

Norikon2

That’s really cool I like that it’s a mix of both it makes Blue Bolt feel more real and relatable so will he ever accept that role or make his own path instead?
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DoctorDestiny

@Norikon2 Hey, Thabks for reading, and the crits still trying to hone my writing. With BB its actually a little bit of column A and some of Column B.
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DoctorDestiny

How when I update some stories and publish a new one,  I get three comments asking to make art for them... What has this worldbcome too, can't even wrote fanfics without people tryin to scam you.
          
          
          Anyway 
          Chapter 2 of Invincible is enroute, 
          1.75 chapters of Unholy are also on the way. 
          And Majesty is also in the works
          
          Thinking of other stories in development aswell, so stay tooned. 

thedarklord86

Guess it ain’t just me in that case 
            
            I haven’t worked on anything in years and I got comments like that as well, I wasn’t sure if it was a scam or not but it felt a little strange to me. 
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kyoto_judo

I usually get some of those comments as well lol, almost daily 
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