DoctorQUirk

My very first attempt at a novel! https://www.wattpad.com/story/102455804

dessyjo

Lmao, You are awesome! I was just hoping you could take a look at my newest story Juvenile Jersey. I was reading the first chapter and it just seems choppy and I have no idea how to smooth it out or what is wrong with it and was hoping to get a second opinion on it. Feel free to critique away, the more honest the better (=

DoctorQUirk

@HayleyBlaiz Don't worry about it; you don't come off as strange at all. And of course, I can take a look at your book. 
          
          I do have a bit of a waiting list, as of right now, for critiques, but I'll definitely get to it unless something drastic should happen.
          
           And hey, I understand the need to find honest critiquers and opinions. I know that I'm always mortified about my own writings, and how they're perceived.  Don't feel shy for asking for some extra help.