Hi! Yeah, I know its slightly confusing and my grammer is bad, but I touch type, so its really quick and the computer I was using had no spell check because it didnt have microsoft word. Plus, it was very early into the posting, so I promised myself I would edit asnsoon as I had finished yhe series. My grammer doesn't improve but I am editing the chapters slowly. I understand how some things can be rather confusing and I re-read myself and think - huh? But I hope to sort it all out.
As for writing in third person, I guess that's because I don't like writing very much in third person because its easy to get lost and go of track and confuse the reader. Anyway, thanks for the compliment about that, lol.
And thanks for reading Daughter Who :-)