Oh thaaat? Forget it really and keep doin what you’re doing. If you wanna take time to build it up then do it. Because a lot of books don’t and then boom chapter 3 the girl pregnant and chapter 5 she’s kidnapped on their wedding day or some other shit. Plus taking a whole builds suspense!
@kaiconic I’m so happy you like it... I just feel like I could have better scenes and more drama.... which shall unfold eventually but who wants to wait that long?