DoloraMaeOfficial

Update on Chosen tonight 

DoloraMaeOfficial

It’s been forever...I feel like y’all died on me. If I update tonight, who’s gunna read & vote?

DoloraMaeOfficial

@kaiconic omg  Boom chapter 3 the girl pregnant!  I’m cackling!! This is dope advice tho & I truly appreciate it fr. 
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-starsailor

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Oh thaaat? Forget it really and keep doin what you’re doing. If you wanna take time to build it up then do it. Because a lot of books don’t and then boom chapter 3 the girl pregnant and chapter 5 she’s kidnapped on their wedding day or some other shit. Plus taking a whole builds suspense!
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DoloraMaeOfficial

@kaiconic I’m so happy you like it... I just feel like I could have better scenes and more drama.... which shall unfold eventually but who wants to wait that long? 
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