Hello there Domi :) I'm a little newer than you but I was wondering if you'd be interested in getting some feedback on your story? I wish I could just offer this for free, but I'm looking for feedback too, and most people aren't really considerate about returning the courtesy. I have a new story up with 3 chapters so if you'd care to read/comment on just one or all 3 I will do the same for as many chapters as you do. Just send me a message on my profile or a PM to let me know if you're interested. Thanks!
