candice_royalis
Imma be honest with you, your book isn't amazing and I don't mean this in mean way. Your book is a bit TOO mysterious, yeah you wanna grab the reader in but your approach is just confusing whoever is reading ya know? I feel as if you're leaving a lot of questions you've put out there unanswered. I hope this helps and keep writing!!
candice_royalis
Aww sry hun! And np i dont mind u taking a look at my works just dont read hybrid tho lmaoo i wrote that when i was like 11
DonTwan
thanks! although this is a bit harsh on my behalf your opinion is always wanted. this is just the very first comment that said it isn't amazing. maybe i should look at your works and use it as an example... idk. thanks again!