Missafrika12

A Memphis Flame is really really nice! It has much already explained but it has enough left out to keep me guessing. I personally like the main character already because of her sass and confidence.
          
          Your grammar is proper.
          
          The story is relatable... Enough. (I'm not sure how an assassin lives (^_^)
          
          But I'd seriously like to know more!!
          Keep up the good work!! 

DonnieSharrell

@Missafrika12 thank you sis I'll be updating the second chapter soon! And yes she does talk proper compared to other characters that will be entering the book
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