@morganadams58 I certainly did not expect that but I thought it was a good twist. lol yea I understand, I did that with my first story, I felt like it was a total cliche. Even though I'm surprisingly into that... I don't know I guess I'm just not happy with it, but I'm going to finish it, well try to anyway (talking about my story btw). But yours is good so... haha winging it worked out fine. OH when I said that, I was just reacting to the whole situation, which was excellent btw. Now that you mentioned it yea I'm curious, like how did Iris become interested in R.J? Was Iris a hook up for her or something else?
