DontWriteMuch

@wintersoltice it was really good, interesting so far! I think the pick up is quite slow though, as in like it's kinda dragging, you need to start building it up more now.. we know that she's been chosen to do this task, but you've told us hardly anything about it, tell us! But other than that, i think it's a fab start to your first book! :D

DontWriteMuch

@wintersoltice it was really good, interesting so far! I think the pick up is quite slow though, as in like it's kinda dragging, you need to start building it up more now.. we know that she's been chosen to do this task, but you've told us hardly anything about it, tell us! But other than that, i think it's a fab start to your first book! :D

pinkpanda1239

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