Doomsday_nF

So... I have been gone for a while now, and I gotta say that every time I had tried to write I have struggled with nothing sounding good. What I mean by that is that whenever I try to write a chapter the single chapter alone may be good, however I am in a pickle with not knowing how to continue the stories without Naruto just wrecking everything in existence.
          	
          	 I wrote these stories all at the same time and there are major continuity issues in all of them where I forget where abilities are used and struggle to find them in my saved backups, as well as making Naruto fairly similar in all the stories. 
          	
          	I mean look at him in all the stories, he can use all base elements, mokuton in two stories, he can use the Flying thunder god to some extent in two(I'm not even sure how accurate this is cause I can't think!!!) He is undoubtedly Insanely OP. 
          	
          	I tried to keep him at a gradual progression, however in my stories I feel as though I had done too much in buffing Naruto that I didn't think of nerfing him in any other way I just wrote to do it essentially.
          	
          	With that said. I think I will try and finish the two Naruto stories I have going at the moment one at a time, so I don't mix up plot lines as the stories take place in roughly the same place. I will start with The Boy from Two Mighty Clans as I believe it is the closest to being complete. I will then move onto Naruto Rewound and hope that I don't mess it up, because a lot of you really enjoy my writing and I feel that I need to apologize for my negligence.  Therefore I am changing the upload schedule once again to TBFTMC will be written on Sundays and Wednesday.
          	
          	As for the Boisterous Hero, I feel that I had written that too hastily and I plan on taking it down for the time being. I got into a major BNHA thing as I was reading the Manga and decided to try something that was interesting, and I posted it without really thinking.
          	
          	Once Again I apologize for my negligence

AdmiralKoerner

@Doomsday_nF I hope your going to continue writing soon, as for your problems with continuity issues with abilities, I would suggest having something like a google docs spreadsheet for each story and take a look at that during each battle. I've been considering doing some writing myself and I know for certain if I were to I would be doing that. If you also feel that the stories are too similar you could always make basic outlines for each story, sure you don't want to stick directly to it as  the idea for each story changes overtime but that would help ensure that their direction is going to be different from each other. It also would be a good idea to add powers over time(or as needed for plot) and not all at onceAlso as for your writing skill, well the amount of people checking up hoping to see new chapters is testament that your writing skill is good and that others appreciate your stories.
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Doomsday_nF

@homeless_hotdog Look I started writing because I thought it was fun, I did not start writing just so someone to come in here when I give an update on what is going on to give me crap. I didn't have to write this to tell everyone what's going on, but I did so that they know what to expect moving forward with my stories. 
          	  
          	  If you don't like it then go somewhere else no one is forcing you to read my stories you can go off and do whatever with your free time, and I will do what I want with mine. 
          	  
          	  Now I will elaborate, With the way that I have written the stories I feel as though I have made them too similar and I don't like how the latest chapters have been turning out. I do not think that they are that good, and I want my writing to be good not mediocre.
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Paul2115FanFic

You've been gone for over a year now and I still check in every day to see if there's an update on my favorite fanfics. I hope that someday you will come back and start writing these two wonderful stories again. I wish you good luck and please come back again. Regards

Doomsday_nF

So... I have been gone for a while now, and I gotta say that every time I had tried to write I have struggled with nothing sounding good. What I mean by that is that whenever I try to write a chapter the single chapter alone may be good, however I am in a pickle with not knowing how to continue the stories without Naruto just wrecking everything in existence.
          
           I wrote these stories all at the same time and there are major continuity issues in all of them where I forget where abilities are used and struggle to find them in my saved backups, as well as making Naruto fairly similar in all the stories. 
          
          I mean look at him in all the stories, he can use all base elements, mokuton in two stories, he can use the Flying thunder god to some extent in two(I'm not even sure how accurate this is cause I can't think!!!) He is undoubtedly Insanely OP. 
          
          I tried to keep him at a gradual progression, however in my stories I feel as though I had done too much in buffing Naruto that I didn't think of nerfing him in any other way I just wrote to do it essentially.
          
          With that said. I think I will try and finish the two Naruto stories I have going at the moment one at a time, so I don't mix up plot lines as the stories take place in roughly the same place. I will start with The Boy from Two Mighty Clans as I believe it is the closest to being complete. I will then move onto Naruto Rewound and hope that I don't mess it up, because a lot of you really enjoy my writing and I feel that I need to apologize for my negligence.  Therefore I am changing the upload schedule once again to TBFTMC will be written on Sundays and Wednesday.
          
          As for the Boisterous Hero, I feel that I had written that too hastily and I plan on taking it down for the time being. I got into a major BNHA thing as I was reading the Manga and decided to try something that was interesting, and I posted it without really thinking.
          
          Once Again I apologize for my negligence

AdmiralKoerner

@Doomsday_nF I hope your going to continue writing soon, as for your problems with continuity issues with abilities, I would suggest having something like a google docs spreadsheet for each story and take a look at that during each battle. I've been considering doing some writing myself and I know for certain if I were to I would be doing that. If you also feel that the stories are too similar you could always make basic outlines for each story, sure you don't want to stick directly to it as  the idea for each story changes overtime but that would help ensure that their direction is going to be different from each other. It also would be a good idea to add powers over time(or as needed for plot) and not all at onceAlso as for your writing skill, well the amount of people checking up hoping to see new chapters is testament that your writing skill is good and that others appreciate your stories.
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Doomsday_nF

@homeless_hotdog Look I started writing because I thought it was fun, I did not start writing just so someone to come in here when I give an update on what is going on to give me crap. I didn't have to write this to tell everyone what's going on, but I did so that they know what to expect moving forward with my stories. 
            
            If you don't like it then go somewhere else no one is forcing you to read my stories you can go off and do whatever with your free time, and I will do what I want with mine. 
            
            Now I will elaborate, With the way that I have written the stories I feel as though I have made them too similar and I don't like how the latest chapters have been turning out. I do not think that they are that good, and I want my writing to be good not mediocre.
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