DoranStephens

Hello lovely readers of my story "Betrayal" .
          	I regret to inform you all that I'm discontinuing the story, the plot was all over the place and it wasn't making any sense to me any more.
          	I will try and come up with a new story. A story with a solid plot. 
          	Thank you all for supporting me when I was writing this story. 
          	
          	Duran Duran out!
          	Byee

DoranStephens

Hello lovely readers of my story "Betrayal" .
          I regret to inform you all that I'm discontinuing the story, the plot was all over the place and it wasn't making any sense to me any more.
          I will try and come up with a new story. A story with a solid plot. 
          Thank you all for supporting me when I was writing this story. 
          
          Duran Duran out!
          Byee

DoranStephens

Ok I have a question for my readers. Please be honest with me...
          What is your guy’s opinion on my book “Betrayal”. Is the plot going all over the place? Do you think I should change somethings in it?
          Please let me know what you think. Because it’s for you (the lovely readers) to enjoy. 
          
          Duran Duran out!
          BYEE!

Sakuragi_9

@DoranStephens I agree as long as you keep the mc percy and not make him retire or something I have no complaints
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h-roked

@DoranStephens i really love your book. i agree that the plot is a bit wobbly, but it is still very nice. just try to keep the main charcater percy
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