I'm inspiring writer hoping to get pointers from my readers about my writing and any bad habits I might need to fix. So if you would read and review my stories that be very much appreciated also don't feel the need to hold back to spare my feelings your comments will help me better myself more in the long run if you give me your full opinion.
Thank you very much for any comments you leave Dorian Westfall.
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Stories by DorianWestfall
Cheech
Twisted mind with two jobs and one goal claiming to have no conscience or pity but has done more damage to or...
Molehills are Mountains
A perfect example of future corporate colonization with a touch of monster size moles.
The Tired Captain
This story is about a tired space captain working hard for her crew but has run into some major problems than...