Aniketos

Hello, I started reading your story "Cold Blooded Lover" and I like it so far but I think you should add a cover and there are some parts that could use improvement. A bit more of background information about the characters and maybe more spacing between lines (especially for the texting parts) could help..
          
          That's just my opinion.
          
          Good luck!
          
          Z

Aniketos

@DorkieD no problem. Also, maybe you should write an actual summary..? Just another suggestion
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DorkieD

@Aniketos Thank you. I'll go over it and fix it up a little.
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