Dormeur1352

Hey dear readers!
          	
          	I'm starting to write another story and I wanted to hear your thoughts on the verb tense. Do you prefer reading a story in the past tense or in the present tense?
          	
          	Past: He tried to avoid the incoming blow, but the fist succeeded in breaking his defense, sending him flying. His body was in pain and his mind was starting to weaken, but he forced his legs to move toward his foe.
          	
          	Present : He tries to avoid the incoming blow, but the fist succeeds in breaking his defense, sending him flying. His body is in pain and his mind is starting to weaken, but he forces his legs to move toward his foe.

gunpat1970

@Dormeur1352 Thank you all the more reason to wait for its completion...
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Dormeur1352

@gunpat1970 from The Path of a Black Sheep in a Fantasy World
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gunpat1970

@Dormeur1352 Hi, what book is that verse from looks interesting cant wait to read.
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angelharrison87

Hi there are you planning on writing more books

angelharrison87

@angelharrison87 ok sounds good
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Dormeur1352

@ angelharrison87  Yes :) I'm working on a new story but it will take a while before I publish it because I'm editing my current ones to be able to plublish on Kindle ;)
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SamaraLove8

Wait- did Tame get removed? I swear you had other stories. I remember you having a story with a leopard and he ended up with a dragon? I don’t know if you made that or if it was some other creator.

Dormeur1352

@ SamaraLove8  no, Tame is not one of my books haha. I do have a story about a werewolf and a dragon, and one about a panther and a vampire x)
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icywrites0109

Please check out my first story! 
          
          What happens, when the life you've known gets turned upside down.... again? You don't settle. 
          
          Ever since a tragic fire took her parents and her home,  Astraea Renai Mikaelson has been living life as a rogue along side her two brothers and best friend, Thea. When fate leads her to the Blackstone Pack and her mate, Astraea must try to figure out where she and her family belong. 
          
          Caught between the pull of a man she can't decipher and the responsibility of protecting those she loves, Astraea must navigate a world filled with uncertainty and second chances. As secrets unravel and emotions run high, she's forced to ask herself: will this pack be her salvation, or her undoing?
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/312204282-second-chance-at-fate?utm_source=web&utm_medium=email&utm_content=share_myworks

AdaOne8

Hi everyone hi author I hope everyone is good here
          
          Author I love your book  
          
          So Yh am writing my first Wattpad story please check it out 
          
          It is called My little wife and this is the link 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/386011312?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=AdaOne8
          
          Age gap
          Mature 
          Funny
           a child brain in an adult body 
          
          You guys will like the story please tell a friend to tell a friend 
          
          Thank you stay safe n hydrated

ani_dn

@Dormeur1352 Hey Del! Thank you so much for supporting my story ❤️I really appreciate it. I hope you are enjoying reading and it made you laugh. I hope you are well and having some great time writing as well. You stories look amazing and I have His Alpha in my planned readings list. 
          Anyways, have fun and have a wonderful day / night! XO Anny

Dormeur1352

@ ani_dn  Yes, your story is really funny (and good of course)! Thank you ♡
            Have a wonderful day too!
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