DorothyMcCracken

@KayIsALoner hi :)

DorothyMcCracken

Hey, everyone!! Sorry, I haven't updated anything! However,  I have been going over my story (what I have so far) and have came to the realization that it isn't leading to what I want, it doesn't have real structure,  my grammar is crap, my transitions are not lining up, and I am leaving out a bunch of information that is kinda important and is leaving you guys confused,  as it did to me. I will re-write it and continue to study it. Thank you for reading it and helping me! If there is anything you would like to point out in my story please feel free to point them out! I will not get butt hurt at ALL! I accept ALL criticisms and use them! I could use your help and would LOVE it!! Thank you, again!