Dorys Memory

Hi! I just started a short stories called "Dear diary". It contains some passages of different characters' diaries. If you really like one you can leave a comment, and I might continue the story in another book ;)

Hii, I just posted the first chapter of my new writing. I'm new to this whole writing stuff, so it might not be perfect. Any kind of feedback is welcome, so I can become better at writing! :)