LizzieBliss

I was just wondering if you had a moment or two to check out my new story, Black Forest.
          
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          Rain's just a girl trying to make it through her boring sucky life, with a mother that doesn't care about her, to an abusive step-dad. She feels compeletely lost.
          Until one high school project change's everything.
          
          Rain's life gets turned up-side-down even more than it has ever been once she is kidnapped by Marcos and Darren, two very different and very attractive young men that say her father -the one she's never met- has sent them to get her before William can.
          
          Secerts of her past unravel, along with relationships, love, war, heart-break and loss.
          
          Can she make it? Or will her world crumble around her?
          
          http://www.wattpad.com/302239-black-forest
          
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          If you like it please vote comment and fan!
          Thanks!
          xoxo

Damonh

hi! I'm Yna and i'm currently writing "Dangerous Prince: The Choice"... i hope you have free time to read it... please leave a comment there (I just want to know what you think about it... and if you liked it) or vote or become a fan...
          here are some of the lines from my story...
          
          "But I have said before that i don't like you!" Urgh! The last thing I needed now was a stalker!
          
          "I don't care," she said stubbornly. "I won't give up. I know you'll fall for me in the end."
          
          "What the -" She smiled when she saw the reaction on my face. "I. Will. Never. Fall. For. You."
          
          Analee's smile grew wider. "I can always make you love me."
          
          "What?" I shouted.
          
          She bit her lower lip again, her eyes gleaming with anticipation.
          
          "You are a pathetic little bitch," I said through gritted teeth. Was this demon making fun of me? Was this some kind of a joke for her?
          
          She walked gracefully towards me and before i could even move a muscle, she tip - toed and kissed me on the lips.
          
          Damn! She stole my first kiss! The nerve of this girl!
          
          She moved her face an inch away from me and whispered huskily, "Well, I am the bitch who will make sure that one day you'll kneel before me begging for my affection."
          
          thanks! ^_^