DoubleEntertain

For anyone who plans to write another murder mystery fanfic, I have a suggestion. Make one of the killers a redeemable killer. 
          	When the votes guess a redeemable killer correctly, trigger a special poll for the reason behind the actions. If guessed correctly, they will become an ally for the rest of the story, before either turning themselves in or committing self elimination depending on the outcome. When guessed wrong however, since the votes guessed the killer correctly, the killer would die, but a random innocent would also die, either as a dual elimination or an unexpected trap set by that specific killer.

philliprue

@DoubleEntertain I prefer planning to write a BL/Yaoi/Lemon fanfic and I have a suggestion for you instead!
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Sp33dySam

✨Paste ✨
          ✨This✨
          ✨On ✨
          ✨Ten✨
          ✨Nicest✨
          ✨People's ✨
          ✨Profiles✨
          ✨If You Get✨
          ✨Ten Back✨
          ✨Then You✨
          ✨Are Really✨
          ✨Special✨

DoubleEntertain

Thanks, although I don't need confirmation from others to know I'm special.
            They can take over my mind and body (which is already very hard to do), but they can't take over my PRIDE.   (Guess who said a line like this)
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creative_ben

Hey Double, I noticed that you added Amazing-Writer to the "temporarily removed" section on your bio. Any reason why? :)

DoubleEntertain

@creative_ben it's more about the creator than the creations.
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creative_ben

@DoubleEntertain Oh okay, but what kind of questionable stuff specifically? Is it too mature or something? :)
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thequeerintrovert

Yo Im new here and don't take any offense to what I say but I read your trash section and D section of the reading list hope you didn't mind and..... They made me cringe 

thequeerintrovert

@thequeerintrovert if you'd like you can check out my profile and read some of my stories it's okay if you don't
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DoubleEntertain

@thequeerintrovert they definitely make readers cringe, that's why those sections exist in the first place. And don't worry, no offense taken.
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DoubleEntertain

For anyone who plans to write another murder mystery fanfic, I have a suggestion. Make one of the killers a redeemable killer. 
          When the votes guess a redeemable killer correctly, trigger a special poll for the reason behind the actions. If guessed correctly, they will become an ally for the rest of the story, before either turning themselves in or committing self elimination depending on the outcome. When guessed wrong however, since the votes guessed the killer correctly, the killer would die, but a random innocent would also die, either as a dual elimination or an unexpected trap set by that specific killer.

philliprue

@DoubleEntertain I prefer planning to write a BL/Yaoi/Lemon fanfic and I have a suggestion for you instead!
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creative_ben

Hey Double, my latest stories *The Last Dance* and *What Happened to My Wattpad Account!?* aren't fanfics, so that means they can't get a rating, correct? :)

creative_ben

@DoubleEntertain Okay, thanks for the clarification! *The Last Dance* is nearly done, so maybe you could check it out when you can. :)
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DoubleEntertain

@creative_ben I hope that made things clear.
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DoubleEntertain

@creative_ben like I said, the creativity is what makes it worth rating, and original stories qualify as it has just as much, if not more creativity than fanfics.
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DoubleEntertain

One of the best fanfics here! I personally wanted to see more of Void!Chase, adding a bit more depth to the storyline, but the creativity of the lore can make up for that.
          With all that said, I'd rate this story...
          *smooth story *memorable *good job covering both sides without confusing us 
          With extra points for creativity... 
          WELCOME TO THE ULTRA LIST!!! 
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/309896970-watching-from-the-stars-a-paw-patrol-skase-fanfic