Hey, all! This is my first time ever posting my work in any sort of way, so I'm looking for a lot of criticism about my writing and my story development. I write in my free time, so don't expect anything too extravagant because sometimes I don't get very much free time and my writing becomes crap. Don't worry though because I can usually tell when and if my writing is crap (Please don't call all my writing crap because I said that now XP).
I've got my first piece up already, Level-F, so I hope that you all enjoy if and tell me on what I have to improve on! I draw a lot of inspiration from other works which is why I put it under as a "Fan-Fiction". Just to start off with this one, a lot of it comes from the video game, Bloody Roar. You can wiki the story about it if you want to see the comparisons. I'll be hopefully posting weekly or maybe a little more depending on how busy I get during the school year and how much I actually write.
P.S. I'm always up for doing colabs, so if you think that I can live up to your writing standards, then by all means go ahead and ask!