Dp_is-Op

So I'm still working through a story in my head.It will probably replace the ntr quantum leap story.Basically the premise will be a goddess gives me powers to administer justice to ntr betrayers but I will just be a normal guy who gets to deliver it.Some stories I won't save the poor bastards and some I will

Red_Crayfish100

@Dp_is-Op okay.
          	  
          	  - Tomoka from Watashi no, Onii-chan. Very f up story and feel sorry for her to become a cuckqueen while her bf/hubby turn to his own little sister, even making them pregnant.
          	  
          	  - Kaori or something like that from Revers to Lovers. Poor girl, her fiance much prefer a nerdy, horny girl over her after knowing that he can't c*m when had s*x with her. Now she lived as a shut-in.
          	  
          	  That's some of them
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Dp_is-Op

@Red_Crayfish100 give me a few examples
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Red_Crayfish100

@Dp_is-Op much, much better if it include cheated FMC get the well-deserved justice, rather than treated as an afterthought, never getting help.
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Dp_is-Op

So I'm still working through a story in my head.It will probably replace the ntr quantum leap story.Basically the premise will be a goddess gives me powers to administer justice to ntr betrayers but I will just be a normal guy who gets to deliver it.Some stories I won't save the poor bastards and some I will

Red_Crayfish100

@Dp_is-Op okay.
            
            - Tomoka from Watashi no, Onii-chan. Very f up story and feel sorry for her to become a cuckqueen while her bf/hubby turn to his own little sister, even making them pregnant.
            
            - Kaori or something like that from Revers to Lovers. Poor girl, her fiance much prefer a nerdy, horny girl over her after knowing that he can't c*m when had s*x with her. Now she lived as a shut-in.
            
            That's some of them
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Dp_is-Op

@Red_Crayfish100 give me a few examples
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Red_Crayfish100

@Dp_is-Op much, much better if it include cheated FMC get the well-deserved justice, rather than treated as an afterthought, never getting help.
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ViceBranham

Would you take commissions  for a ntr revenge story based on a doujin?

Dp_is-Op

@ViceBranham I could give you suggestions for other writers who might take commissions and who are better writers than me
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Dp_is-Op

@ViceBranham I'm extremely flattered by the request but I'm too inconsistent with my writing to take any commission
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Rodrigofjgz

Excelente começo da história, estou ansiosa para ver no que isto vai dar.
          Sugestões para a história:
          -fazer o Hiroki acabe como ghost cod
          - fazer uns capítulos delas reagindo a ele
          - fazer o Hiroki executor da Yakuza
          - dar a Hiroki a personalidade de HUNK residente evil ( frio, extremamente racial, sem moral nem empatia só lhe interessa quem é o alvo e quanto vai receber).
          - fazê-las tornarem-se yandere(clichê) 
          -caso sigas rota mercenário, fazer uma missão do Hiroki enviado para mater kokujin por causa de dívidas e elas testemunham o lobo em época de caça
          -Caso rota soldado inspirar no cod moderno warfare o antigo 2007 1,2,3 e fazer uma missão de resgate a reféns e que elas testemunhem o fantasma trabalhando.
          - misturar com residente evil e puxar as ideias do HUNK ou tornar o Hiroki nosso rei delas Leon S. Kennedy.

Dp_is-Op

@Rodrigofjgz I'm not confident in my ability to write action or lemon scenes.If I do write any type of action it will be very subtle
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Rodrigofjgz

Corretor fdp na 4 não é racial mas com racional tipo robô
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